Tally and Shay arrive at the rusty ruins. Shay and Tally explore and shay tells tally more. Then they go to the roller coaster and start to ride, and Tally actually enjoys it. Then Tally falls of but gets caught by the hover board. Tally gets mad at Shay for not telling her about the gap in the track that made Tally fall. Tally forgives shay and ask how she knows that it is called a roller coaster. Shay said a Friend told her. Tally ask if her friend is a pretty now Shay says no. Tally is surprised, and shay makes her promise that she wont tell her Friend never got the surgery, And they go to find Shays friend hiding in the Rusty Ruins.
Similes-
1. " Riding high and silent as if not to disturb the ghosts of the dead city." pg.61
2." The Rustie's had been stuck down in these streets like a horde of rats trapped in a burning maze." pg.61
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very good paragraph Sydney. thats exactly what happened.
ReplyDeletethanks alot madisen
ReplyDeleteI like your quotes and I like your paragraph! But girlfriend, you need to make sure you are capitalizing everything that needs to be (like characters names and such) and then your blog will be perfect...like mine! :)
ReplyDeletelol Mrs.Valdez your funny
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